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The Girl Who Avenged Herself

奇女雪怨

SourceXieduo (Harmonious Warnings)
AuthorShen Qifeng
EraQing dynasty · Qianlong era, c. 1736–1798
Writtenc. 1790
GhostLoveJustice
A pale ghost woman in the lamplight brushes exam paper for a trembling scholar at a desk, ink-wash painting
Illustration generated by AI, based on the ancient Chinese text.

Xianniang was the daughter of a gentry family of Xiayi, skilled in lyric poetry and in the examination essay besides. Each composition she wrote, old teachers and learned men would withdraw their hands: “The lady scholar, were she to change hairpin for comb, would surely reach the jade hall and the golden horse.” At seventeen her parents died one after another, and Xianniang was alone.

Across the court was a certain scholar’s villa, with a magnolia leaning on the east wall. Xianniang rose early and picked its flowers; the scholar saw her and bowed at the wall. She blushed and tried to flee. He said: “I am no Song Yu, daring to climb the wall. Only — studying alone without a teacher, I wish to be a Wang Xizhi, presenting myself at the flower-pinning seat.” He produced a volume of his essays and asked her to correct them. She took it in, read it — talent bright and ample, with one or two small flaws that would tell against him in the hall — and crossed them out plainly. Next day, picking flowers at the corner, she returned it in her sleeve. The scholar was grateful.

In time they grew close. He wrote a mock exam topic, “Climbing the east neighbour’s wall to embrace his maiden,” to tease her; she answered with “The words of the matchmaker.” He laughed: “You took the quick pulse but answered slowly, quite missing the topic’s intent.” She said: “I feared a hasty brush would leave no room to close.” He thought her words open, climbed the wall, seized her arm: “I have served you as teacher daily; why not seat me in your crimson curtain?” She resisted lightly: “Scholars most easily forget the heart. Once you betray your teacher, how do you know you will not be a Feng Meng killing Yi?” He swore by mountains and rivers, pledged by sun and moon. And she joined him — morning wall, evening room, near half a year.

Xianniang pressed him to send the betrothal gifts. He promised with his mouth and delayed. Later he arranged a marriage with another family. On the wedding night Xianniang learned, stood under the wall, hoping he would come to bid farewell — but he had built his phoenix nest and forgotten the wild swans. Xianniang, in fury, shut the door and hanged herself. The scholar heard and only sighed.

Later he went to the provincial exam; just as he took up the brush, Xianniang floated in. He feared she came for revenge and trembled — but she showed no anger. Instead she smoothed his paper and ground his ink, urged him to apply himself, explained the topic, and left. That year he passed the provincial exam. At the metropolitan exam she came again, smoothing paper and grinding ink as before, and mended the awkward phrases in his paper; that year he passed again.

He placed second class in the palace exam and was posted to the Ministry of Agriculture. Xianniang came: “You hold a capital post and draw a measure of salary — how can that fill an official’s purse? Why not seek an outside post; a two-thousand-bushel rank is soon yours.” He nodded.

Within two years he was promoted to prefect. A poor soul suddenly given a city and five horses, he squeezed the people and privately fattened his bag.

Soon he took bribe-money and released a criminal. The matter broke and was reported up; he was sentenced to public execution. The night before, he seemed to see Xianniang, embroidered scarf and ring-collar, hair loosed, come and say: “Years of wrong and resentment, now at last redressed. The reason I aided your career is that a book-scholar buried at his window — where would he meet great calamity? I had to place you in office, so the state law could be applied openly. The mirror of karma hangs high; the reckoning is near.” She laughed and left.

The Duo comment: One act of broken faith, ten years of frustration. Who knew the mirror beneath the lotus could also be a place for the brow-painting woman to take revenge? So to be struck from the cassia register is still a light punishment for the faithless lad.

Original classical Chinese text · 原文

线娘,夏邑士族女也。善词赋,兼工帖括。每构一艺,老师宿儒辄敛手曰:“女学士易钗而栉,怕不到玉堂金马。”年十七,父母相继逝,线娘块然独处。隔院为某生别业。庭中玉兰一本,斜倚东垣。线娘晓起,摘花其上,某望见之,长揖墙下。线娘赪颜欲避。某曰:“仆非宋玉,岂敢妄意登墙?只因独学五师,愿作王逸少,执贽簪花座下耳。”随出窗课一卷,嘱其点定。线娘携归内室,阅其文,才华秀瞻,间有一二小疵,碍于场屋者,直笔删去。明日,折花墙角,袖而还之。某人感佩。 久之,踪迹渐密。某作《逾东家墙而搂其处子》题文挑之。线娘作《媒妁之言》题文以答。某笑曰:“急脉而缓受之,全失命题之旨矣。”线娘曰:“恐率尔操觚,以后无收束处耳。”某觉其言可入,梯垣而过,急捉其臂曰:“仆日以师事卿,何不坐我绛帐?”线娘薄拒之,曰:“读书人最易昧心。一朝倍师,保不作逢蒙杀羿乎?”某乃指誓山河,矢盟日月。线娘遂同欢会。朝垣夕室,将及半载。线娘促其委禽。某口诺之,而迁延不报。后竟议婚他族。结褵之夕,线娘始悉,立墙下,望某一来诀别。而某营鸾凤新巢,不复记野合鸳鸯矣!线娘愤极,阖户自经。某闻之,悼叹而已。 后赴试乡闱,甫执卷构思,见线娘翩然而来。某惧其仇己,毂觫万状。而线娘殊无怒容,反为拂纸磨墨,嘱其尽心文字,并讲解题旨而去。是科领乡荐。继应礼部试,线娘复来。其拂纸磨墨,一如在乡闱时。卷中村不妥字句,代易之,是科又报捷。 殿试二甲,观政农部。线娘时来曰:“汝任京秩,得升斗禄,乌能充宦囊?盍谋作外任,二千石可立致也!”某颔之。 不二年,外擢郡守。某本一介寒骨,骤得专城五马,朘剥小民,私肥囊橐。 亡何,受盗金纵法。事败上闻,论弃市。前一夕,恍惚见线娘绣巾环领,披发而来,曰:“数年冤愤,而今始得伸也。吾所以佐汝功名者,因书生埋头窗下,何处得罹大曲?必使汝置身仕途,乃得明正国法,业镜高悬,折证正不远也。”欢笑而去。 铎曰:“一事负心,十年毷氉。岂知芙蓉镜下,亦有时为扫眉人报仇地哉?乃知除名桂籍,尚属薄幸儿宽罚耳!”

From 《奇女雪怨》, Xieduo. A betrayed girl's ghost advances her faithless lover through every exam so the law can execute him.

Source. From Xieduo (Harmonious Warnings) (谐铎), by Shen Qifeng , c. 1790. The original text is in the public domain; this English rendering and the accompanying notes are original work.

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